This week I made the following comment on Anna’s Blog!

Blog Post No. 4

Hi Anna, thanks for sharing your points on the Multimedia Evaluation models as well as your edited video! I agree that the edited video is more grabbing and fluid than the original. The increased crispness of the video makes it overall a more helpful video in its goal of showing how Honey works. Video editing from instructional videos to entertainment makes a big difference from pure “watchability” to helpfulness. Again, I do feel like your video has improved to be closer to both!